bahasa indonesia
In bahasa Indonesia class, we made a persuasive essay about our province. By doing this assginment I learned about my province, Nusa Tenggara Barat. For this essay, I choose to write about the beauty of nature in NTT. One of the natural beauty is the Komodo dragon, that was originated from NTT. I learned about rare flora and fauna that is found in NTT.
RESULT
I made a lot of improvements in my essay from the first draft to the second. I was helped by my teacher, Bu Yuda to improve my essay. The teacher gave me comments and some times with her to have consultation about my essay. I think this really helped me because I can understand my mistakes and how I can fix it. The final result of my essay is 6- and I am satisfied with it, because I really worked by best to improve this essay. |
WHAT TO IMPROVE
I can improve in the future by making my writing clearer and more focused. I can do this by practicing my writing skills. I also need to improve on my analysis of the information I got from my research, so my essay would be more in detail. From my research I got a lot of information about NTT in various websites.
I can improve in the future by making my writing clearer and more focused. I can do this by practicing my writing skills. I also need to improve on my analysis of the information I got from my research, so my essay would be more in detail. From my research I got a lot of information about NTT in various websites.
IB LEARNER PROFILE
I showed knowledgable while doing my persuasive essay because I collected all the information from my research and tried my best to analyze it in detail. I think knowledgable is needed when researching because you have to make a summary or analysis about it, so it will be written in our own words; and if we dont write it in our own words it is considered as plagarism, which is strongly not tolerated in this school.
I showed knowledgable while doing my persuasive essay because I collected all the information from my research and tried my best to analyze it in detail. I think knowledgable is needed when researching because you have to make a summary or analysis about it, so it will be written in our own words; and if we dont write it in our own words it is considered as plagarism, which is strongly not tolerated in this school.