English

In English class, we learned about different cultures in south America. Each students are given one country in South America to research about it and make an essay about it. The essay have to include about the geographical information of the country, but most importantly, the most important information is their culture. I wrote an essay about Bolivia. By making an essay about Bolivia, I learned a lot about how the Bolivian live with their culture. The culture of Bolivia is called Andes and they worship their goddess by burning offerings.

RESULT
I got a passing score for my informative essay, and I need to improve on it. I made some grammatical errors that impacts the reader to not understand my writing. My essay is three pages in total with the bibliography.

WHAT TO IMPROVE? HOW?
I need to improve my grammar skills so people can understand what I am trying to say and I can expand my english vocabulary by improving my grammar skills. I can improve this by reading more books so I can know how authors write quality stories. Reading books can also improve my vocabulary.

IB LEARNER PROFILE
I showed inquirers while doing this essay because I still want to learn about english literature to improve my english skills. I can be an inquirer by asking the teacher questions when I need help or when I dont understand something.